I read
one of my typed stories or the stories my friend is supposed to be updating but
doesn’t really, my friend emailed the story to me and so if not an officially
story but it is called Addiction. it was about a little boy who about 13 or 14
name Leonardo Galanthus who gets adopted or more like taken in by a vampire mix
family. He an albino and human while his somewhat adopted brother Kuura (pronounced: Kuu-ra) is a mixture of
things, Kuura I think is a half vampire, forest spirit and a big fox spirit of
the forest.
He
secretly also the vampire king who’s just looking for his dead friend who
happens to look way too similar. Pretty those two together are kind of like a
family on its own, but then they have Murasaki who also a vampire mix but she more of a not very
likeable character just because she just has a look of hate she hold back
towards Leo. She if fact kind of was plotting to murder Leo because of who he
actually is, even if Leo is a human he’s not integrally human and he’s more
like a half human.
My reaction
to it was that sort of from what I read it pretty ok, it needs a few areas of
help, but I really good on the imagination and I mean that most of the pass or
chapter was just based from imagination. But I like the main character as Leo
is portrays of my favorite mythical beast; a phoenix. Kuura is another favorite
of my but I won’t go into much detail about him.
